Website Critique - Suggestions?

[gbonilla]

Hey guys, I just wanted to get your opinion on my website.

http://www.thezombietech.com

Am I missing things?

What can I improve on?

Typos?

All of your input is appreciated.

 

[gbonilla]

I normally don't believe in bumps but I'm not too sure what else to do, heh.

Any help would really be appreciated, I'm not sure if I've overlooked things?

 

[Cambridge PC Support]

nice clean site - not too sure about the name though!

 

[gbonilla]

I've gotten that from quite a few of my older client (the few I have), the thing is I direct most of my advertising to people from the ages of around 18 - 28.

I am a college student working as a part time computer technician and it seems as though many of the college students are receptive to it. I am just starting out right now though, so.. the novelty could wear off.

 

[Fixedathome.com]

It's a nice looking site and I quite like the name!
My only comments would be that there is not really any information on what you are offering unless you go to the small business page. What about residential clients?

 

[Martyn]

Well I agree with the last post you need to let people know what you do on the first page otherwise they just may leave straight away.

 

[gbonilla]

@Fixedathome

I have the residential information on the pricing page. I should reconsider the naming of my section, I just sort of felt like "Pricing" was a bit more eye catching.

@Martyn

Thanks for the tip, I've been struggling with making the frontpage look visually appealing or practical. I've been finding it difficult to make it both. I'll reconsider the placement of things. Thanks.

 

[cooke1099]

At what Martyn said about the front page, is very true. By also increasing your content and linking into your site through content, it will also help your rankings on Google, Bing, and the rest of the search engines. The design looks great, but as the web designers say "Content is King". Good luck

 

[Xander]

"The Zombie Tech is dedicated to a fair rate, not a flat rate. Many competitors will charge you the same price for most repairs; the fact is that most repairs aren’t equal in difficulty."
"Given the nature of on-site repairs and the length of time that most computer repairs take, on-site repairs will be priced at $149 or less. If the repair is going to take longer than 3 hours, it will be taken back to the shop and priced at In-Shop prices."
"The Zombie Tech services all areas within 20 miles of Fullerton, CA. Every additional 10 miles will be an extra $5."

"In today’s competitive arena, your company has to be able to keep up with a plethora of programs to stay at the top of your game."

Font sizes seem to vary a bit from paragraph to paragraph.

 

[gbonilla]

@cooke: Thanks for the suggestion, looks like I gotta get working on some more content!

@ehousecalls: Thanks for the help, I can get a bit overzealous when posting up new content; I often fail to give it another read through. An extra pair of eyes is always appreciated.