Second business, opinions on the website?

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Seems to be a lot of dead space between sections on pages at least on my phone..

Also your telephone number in the menu and footer need the tel: infront of them. The footer isn't a link and the menu 404s

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Atmospheric Productions? At first I though you might be getting into Earth Sciences or Climate stuff...
Wouldn't something simple like "Party Boys" or "DJ Rave" be more apt especially for SEO?

Anyone searching for a DJ wouldn't think to look up Atmospheric Productions and would probably not associate it with "Party" or "entertainment."

Site is not encrypted and has a "tracker" on the home page.
Oh, and it takes about 7 seconds for my browser to show anything. And I block trackers as well...
My .02
 
2 milliseconds..... LOL!!!!

No, actually it took close to 6-7 seconds to load the main landing page. But after a reboot, for another reason, it seems ok. So maybe my MBP was just acting up.
It takes both my work and house about 3 seconds force reloading the page. That's why I was curious what was considered to long. It isn't instant, but I consider it fast enough since the little clock animation shows people it is loading.

Atmospheric Productions? At first I though you might be getting into Earth Sciences or Climate stuff...
Wouldn't something simple like "Party Boys" or "DJ Rave" be more apt especially for SEO?
eh... We like the name. :cool:

Anyone searching for a DJ wouldn't think to look up Atmospheric Productions and would probably not associate it with "Party" or "entertainment."
our biggest competitor is atgdj.com sure it has DJ in the name, but most upscale entertainment package businesses don't advertise "dj" as hard as our equivalent "pizza tech".

We are hoping to expand the businesses services once income starts... incoming.

Site is not encrypted and has a "tracker" on the home page.
yeahhhh... I've just been lazy with SSL... I will do it, I promise.

Oh, and it takes about 7 seconds for my browser to show anything. And I block trackers as well...
that's a bit to long... :(

Loading time of homepage is quite long.
same question, about how long, I can't make a website with 20 200KB photos load instant, I am compressing as hard as I can.

There's no "Call to Action". Like, what is your company about?
We don't want a quick sale. our smallest package is $1000 for 4 hours and 1 body. I didn't want to attract anyone but high-end customers.

Might need @sapphirescales to come give an opinion :p

Like, what is your company about?
You didn't read the website! chances are you aren't the type to spend a pretty penny on an entertainment service though. Which is fine, we are trying to hit a certain demographic of people.
 
Hello! I'd like to chime in here, as anyone would not think I would. :D

First, the good part. It took no time for me to load, however - contribute that to a 1 gig connection. Also, its not WP. :)

Now then. The template (yes, I know its a free template) is meh IMO. There is no need for the hamburger menu to be present when in full screen. But that an easy fix as I'll show you.

Code:
aside > .sidebar { display:  none; }

@media screen and (min-width: 768px) {
    aside >.sidebar {
        display: block;
    }
}

Also, since its bootstrap, the class text-left is your friend and you should ditch the center text. Just open the css file in notepad and replace:

Code:
align-items: center;
with
align-items: left;
or
text-align: left;

I suppose my main criticism is that for all that you put into it, the entire site could be done (and really has been) on a single page. And also, Essential Oils? Really? I've been in the music scene for over 30 years, was a DJ (a real DJ - not a knob turner and arm waver like today's so called DJ's) in the 80's and early 90's and never ever had essential oils in the mix. Pun intended.
 
First, the good part. It took no time for me to load, however - contribute that to a 1 gig connection. Also, its not WP.
well that's good.

To bad I can't decide if I should work on trying to make it load faster, or if it's not a my-side problem...

Now then. The template (yes, I know its a free template) is meh IMO.
Got a better template? I searched for hours, I actually really like it! this is also the third template I've tried for this business, best so far that I've found.

class text-left is your friend and you should ditch the center text.
Why should I left it and not center it? might just be design preference of an argument...

There is no need for the hamburger menu to be present when in full screen. But that an easy fix as I'll show you.
I might take off the sidebar menu in big screen, my thought was that I wanted mobile users to feel comfortable if they go on a computer... Trying to make both versions close to the same experience.

I'll run it past a few friends and get their opinion too. Good eye though!

And also, Essential Oils? Really?
Ever been to a corporate event? It's a real thing!
I've been in the music scene for over 30 years, was a DJ
yeahhhh, essential oils aren't really for the party scene. :P

We aren't a party company, we build events... Guess it's not clear enough, should probably emphasize that.

I suppose my main criticism is that for all that you put into it, the entire site could be done (and really has been) on a single page.
it could of been 1 page, but it'd be a LONG page... Main page gives an overview onto everything, about page give a more in depth into us (and when we hire employees the page will feel more useful), and the services page is still being added to just can't afford all the services we want to provide at the start.
 
Got a better template?
https://themehunt.com/

We aren't a party company, we build events... Guess it's not clear enough, should probably emphasize that.
;)

it could of been 1 page, but it'd be a LONG page
I disagree. With the content you have, I can put your entire site in one page and it would not be as "big" as the front page is now. Bootstrap is amazing once you know how to use it. W3Schools is your friend. However, I do understand that this is a one off by you. I do web development on a daily bases and that is a difference.
 
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LMFAO! One of these things is not like the other, one of these things just doesn't belong.. can you tell me which thing is not like the other, before I finish this song?

DJ & MC! MUSIC! LIGHTING! VIDEOS AND BRANDING! AIR MACHINES... and essential oils...

Wow... this is pretty special stuff.
 
I do work for a really successful events company run by a man and wife team.

Focus on events like weddings for your big payers, leave out the corporate essential oils.
 
I like it. The only thing I would change is less space at the bottom section where it says "Get in touch with us". Less space between that and call, location, etc area.
 
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