new website

[wvstephens]

Ok I have the site finished, at least I think I do. I wanted to get everyones input on it. Make sure my grammar is correct lol. It is built off a wordpress theme. I chose wordpress because it is quick and easy to update from pretty much anywhere.

http://callnutech.com

 

[ICEinLAVA]

the home page and welcome page have the same content and kind of mean the same thing. i would delete the welcome page and link button

 

[lward1]

I like it, and it looks good. Like was said when I click on home page it goes to the welcome page.

 

[wvstephens]

Yes I have been fighting with this all morning. I am still working on removing that welcome link from the header.

Ok I finally fixed it, with a plugin called exclude pages just for reference it is here

http://wordpress.org/extend/plugins/exclude-pages/

 

[16k_zx81]

It needs a contact form.

 

[iisjman07]

Overall I think it's good. Two things I'd change is the page title; on my pc it is just 'http://callnutech.com/'. Another thing is I'd switch the locations of the social networking links to facebook and twitter with your phone number which is currently at the bottom of the page. I'd also make the phone number a bigger font just for emphasis.

Just noticed, you should read the text in your site as some of it doesn't appear to make sense, eg:

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[wvstephens]

Overall I think it's good. Two things I'd change is the page title; on my pc it is just 'http://callnutech.com/'. Another thing is I'd switch the locations of the social networking links to facebook and twitter with your phone number which is currently at the bottom of the page. I'd also make the phone number a bigger font just for emphasis.

Just noticed, you should read the text in your site as some of it doesn't appear to make sense, eg:

Yes I thought I changed the site description so it would show in the browser, the theme I chose is a bit buggy. I change things and then they don't change I will get to work on the title. About the Social links, I was thinking the same thing as you.

My wording and grammar is why I posted for a critique. I have never been the best with words.

Thanks everyone for the suggestions.

 

[16k_zx81]

My wording and grammar is why I posted for a critique. I have never been the best with words.

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[16k_zx81]

My wording and grammar is why I posted for a critique. I have never been the best with words.

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[wvstephens]

Thanks for the input, I have made the changes. I am still working on the contact form and will have it finished today.

 

[parker.casey]

You should give the site a nice Title, rather than just callnutech.com in the title bar... also, do you -have- a newsletter? Overall, the thing looks rather nice.

 

[16k_zx81]

Thanks for the input, I have made the changes. I am still working on the contact form and will have it finished today.

The spelling, capitalisation and punctuation errors in the Specials section still needs your attention.

 

[wvstephens]

Thanks everyone for the help. I did redo the specials page, I hope I did not butcher it to much.

I also finally got the title straightened out, this theme I chose has really been a pain to get everything to apply like it should. Hopefully after business picks up more, and my shop is open in Jan. I can hire a pro to design me a proper one.

 

[wvstephens]

You should give the site a nice Title, rather than just callnutech.com in the title bar... also, do you -have- a newsletter? Overall, the thing looks rather nice.

I am still working out the kinks on the newsletter. The way I have it setup with feedburner is I post to a newsletter page I created in Wordpress. The issue I am having is no matter what I do that page keeps showing up as a link on the site, in a weird place mind you, not in the menu. I have been all through the code and I can't come up with a reason why. It only started putting the link in after I moved the social network links to the bottom of the sidebar.

 

[16k_zx81]

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devise = make up a cunning plan. device = a gadget
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[wvstephens]

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devise = make up a cunning plan. device = a gadget
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LOL thanks for the help. You know I thought I spelled that wrong. I even checked google... Where would I be without you 16k

 

[wvstephens]

New site design

Ok, I'm at it again, everyday I would look at my site and think god I hate it. Well after about an hour of tinkering today, can changing up the theme I think I am finally happy.

Not much of the wording has changed, but just the overall look and feel of the site. If anyone has any suggestions, I am always open to them.

BTW link to the site is in my sig..

 

[16k_zx81]

The site looks great! Nice layout and graphics. Good work!

Front page - "Need some advise" - change to "ADVICE"

For SEO purposes, check keyword density and add internal links to preferred keywords.

Add a meta descriptin

add ALT text to all images​

 

[wvstephens]

The site looks great! Nice layout and graphics. Good work!

Front page - "Need some advise" - change to "ADVICE"

For SEO purposes, check keyword density and add internal links to preferred keywords.

Add a meta descriptin

add ALT text to all images​

lol you are always a life saver on my lack of ability to choose the correct word.

I will get right on the suggestions though I forgot the alt tags...

 

[wvstephens]

Well I updated the alt tags, but for some reason the images are not showing the alt tags when I hover over them.