first leaflet, critique please

I'm really not a fan of centre alignment. You need more space between the images and text. Actually more space everywhere. Space it out more. It looks too crammy.

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Agreed icons need to be spaced out better. Also I don't like the glow effect on the text. Just my opinion though.
 
Nice leaflet

Hope I am not too late to the party, but here goes my critique:

The colors and graphics are very nice. I like the way you highlight key service points (no trip fees, no fix - no charge, etc). I also like the way you highlight your PC Tuneup option. The leaflet builds up trust in the reader's mind.

It does get busy and slightly confusing where you talk about "generous discounts" for those who combine services. Perhaps it would be simpler to say something along these lines: "Pick two or more of our service options and take 25% off" -- or whatever the discount is.

I am not sure why you charge slightly less to do a complete rebuild of a laptop over a desktop. That seems backwards to me - but maybe you are more comfortable with laptops?

Overall an excellent design! Keep up the good work.
 
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