you've gone to a lot of trouble to make a professional-looking site. I like the design and most of the wording is compelling.
I spotted 7 punctuation errors (incorrect use of apostrophes) and 2-3 spelling errors.
re use of apostrophes - they should only be used to indicate ommitted letters, possession, and in some rare instance to specify plurals.
the planets (plural of planet)
the planet's rings (rings belonging to the planet)
the bins
the bin's handle
the computers
the computer's screen
more
here
Also, I could be wrong but the graphics seem a bit slow. Have you optimised the png files to get their sizes down?
I think the body text on most of the pages needs a bit of a trim and edit, but on the whole (if it wasnt for the spelling errors) if I was a customer I would want to deal with you if that was how I had learned about your company. Its a good site.
I really like the way you've stated the case for customers to use your service in the
Wireless section.
PC M.O.T is well laid-out also, and makes a good case for your work.
Set up and Installation works well too IMO
Virus and Spyware removal is good. I'd buy one if I didnt already know how to do it myself
A few observations:
"straightforward" should be one word. (home page)
"Using the latest and most sophisticated diagnostic tools, We specialise in home diagnostics" - no capital after the comma (About)
"If the
diagnostics cannot be repaired on site" - I think possibly you mean 'computer' or 'problem' - you're probably not repairing "diagnostics". (About)
Suggestion:
We specialise in home diagnostics using the latest and most sophisticated technologies. There is no need to go to the trouble of unplugging your PC to bring it to us. If you prefer, we can come to you, usually within 2 hours of your call. If the machine needs to be taken off-site, we can deliver and set it up for you when the repairs are complete [usually 1-3 days].
"In most cases - we can be on site within the hour!!" contradicts the text above @ 2 hours. Not consistent. (Repair Service)
"Need advise?" should be "need advice?" (repair service)
The 'hardware upgrades" section is waffly. Doesnt seem to make any particular point. You lost me at "If you have had your computer for six months or more you may already be thinking about a computer upgrade". What is it you are trying to compel your readers to do here?
There's another spelling error there somewhere. Its getting late and I dont have time to track it down. From memory it was something a spell checker would pick up though....
Apart from these few minor things it looks good IMO. Well done
