All i can see are walls of text, no one and i mean no one is going to bother trawling through all that information if you have not engaged there interest on the front page you have lost that customer.
You are missing a fundamental aspect of webdesign ... Images!, there are many other issues that could be addressed but before this, but first you need to engage with your clients visual senses.
This is ofcourse my personal opinion, i in no way mean to offend or slate your work hard work i only wish to help.