Website Critique

[SimmonsComputer]

I would appreciate it if anyone would like take a look at my website and let me know how it may be improved.

www.simmonscomputer.com

Thanks in advance.

 

[jfm]

The overall visuals are ok, but your 2 main images takes about 3/4 of the whole 1st page, you need to optimize your space for much more ad copy.
No call to action at all.
Can't even click (touch) to call your phone number on the top.

SOE, your title needs some work too,
Simmons Computer ServiceSimmons Computer Services 864-810-0810
Thats your actual title page, and one of the most important SEO aspect.

Those are the two most evident things to work on before even going down the list
Hope this helps.