Website Critique

[zwonga.com]

Hi

I recently finnished my website, can you guys have a look and let me know what you think? Please suggest things i can add to it too

www[dot]zwonga[dot]com

(can't post links yet sorry)

Thanks
Mike

 

[MikeLierman]

Awesome work! Like the design. Don't know about the name. I'm in the U.S. so I don't know if the U.K. has any significance on the word "Zwonga" but sounds to me like a smothie. A delicious one with berries and bananas.

Anyways, I would consider getting a better name and domain.

1. What's with the server stuff on the left? Do you do web hosting?

2. What the.. "62 point computer health check".... Do you check 62 things? Doesn't make sense to me.

3. Don't have your site redirect to /repair. It's bad for SEO and Google doesn't like that? Why? Because landing pages that redirect or change the URL are typical of scams and phising.


Mike

Tapin' the talk from my Droid x2.

 

[Martyn]

I like the website, same as mentioned not sure about the name but you had your reasons

One big thing missing - phone number nice and large front page. That pink blob at the upper left is asking for a

"Call now
xxxxx xxxxxx" in nice big letters

 

[zwonga.com]

Thanks for your input guys,

I will definately look in to explaining my 62 pooint health chech a little more clearly on my website (yes i do cover 62 things). My site currently redirects to repair because on the main site there is my old website i should probably remove this and use the standard domain, I didnt realise it was bad for SEO :/. Thanks for your input mike.

The call now in big letters is a great idea thanks Martyn, just realised potential customers have to click a link before seeing any of my contact information :/ this cant be good.

Thanks
Mike

 

[moto_monkey]

From a visual standpoint I have issues with the bright magenta curvy part of the main graphic that has an image of a laptop on it:

1) This part of the image is very dramatic and draws the readers attention away from the rest of the page.

2) This part of the image given that it is pretty much the center of attention seems to serve no purpose other than show a very muted and low contrast image of a laptop computer, which is hard to make out. What Martyn said makes a lot of sense it would be a good spot for the telephone number.​

On the navigation menu at the top of the page the Offers menu option with The Computer Health Check option seems a little out of place to me. I would put the CHC in both of the services section pages and highlight that service more on the home page.

The only other issue would be the color of the top navigation menu. It does not stand out as much as it could since it is the same color magenta as the main graphic. I would go with a color for it that contrasts the magenta of the main graphic more.

I like the overall design, well done.