Web Design Concept

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Any opinions?

Not finished yet, still working on it.

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I really don't understand the point of putting incomplete work up for critique.

Theres nothing there yet to comment on. What were you looking for people to say about it?

Also, I don't understand what it is you're selling, or who your target market is, so really nothing to go on there either.
 
I really don't understand the point of putting incomplete work up for critique.

Theres nothing there yet to comment on. What were you looking for people to say about it?

Also, I don't understand what it is you're selling, or who your target market is, so really nothing to go on there either.

Looking for comments on current look, where its heading. I posted that it wasn't finished.
 
Where its heading in regard to what? WTF is 'mejoo'?

What is it, exactly, that you're trying to sell?

step 1, step 2, step 3, step 4 ... of what?

Whats the relevance of a quote from "some business"?

What is it that you can 'buy today' for $89?

All I see is what looks like a vanilla theme with one image put into it. My impression is that this is a bunch of placeholders.

If you've done more work than that, then apologies for not noticing it.

So that's what I see. It looks like nothing much has been done to it and there's no clear indication of what the product or service is. Confused by this page as much as by this thread.
 
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Like 16k_zx81, I'm also confused as to what this design is meant for.

It looks like your going to sale a product, I am right? I see something that can be bought for $89. If so, I can critique that.

The design itself looks kind of dull, but that can be because the lack of content.

Not sure what the stock pic is there for, but you should feature your product there. In fact, if you can, a video presentation/demo of the product would be best.

The "Buy Today" Button looks a little too plain, you also might want to reconsider a black button. Maybe, use the same blue that's used in the client login button.

I can't really tell, but will people need to scroll down the page to buy it? If that's the case, that's not good. Having a buy button on the bottom is good if you also include one on the top.

The client testimonies is important to gaining one's trust, if possible offer a money back guarantee or risk free trial as well.

Honestly, the newsletter subscription and the social media icons are useless at the bottom. If you can't find a better place, be sure to push them after the sale. For example, after they buy the product, have a page setup that pushes them to add you on the social networks for better support and important updates etc. Or even have them post a testimony on your Facebook page for an insensitive. Basically, have a good reason for them to add you.

Most people think Subscribe = $
Change "Subscribe to our newsletter" to something like "Get the latest news", or the like.

Also, the logo should have more meaning to the product that you sell. Right now, it's just a plain typeface. The actual name itself is quite intriguing. So, see if you can get something professional done for the logo.

The design is not complete yet, so I can't get too in-depth, but make sure you include the reasons why your product is answer to their problems.
 
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