New website...lets try this again!

I had a very quick look and the thing I would do is add your phone number in a pretty large sized font to the right of your logo. I know it's at the bottom of the page, but customers rarely read a whole page
 
Howdy,

I like the theme. I think that you might benefit from increasing the size of some of the headings to make it more navigable at a glance. Also, I'm not sure how good newsletters are as a marketing tool but the newsletter signup has great prominence compared to the business component of the page.

Cathal
 
Telephone Number

Try putting your telephone number at the top in a big font, maybe next to logo. Also just as test try putting the sign up to the news letter etc on the right and see before and after, i think it would look better on the right.


Thanks
 
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I like it, very clean and stands out well. The "off-line" thing...Depending on how much you are going to be online I might get rid of it. Really don't care for those things when they are always off-line. But, if you use it great.
 
Very clean and basic.

It seems your logo gets cut off at the top though, and its not easy to distinguish what your site is 'bout via first glance.

As a personal preference, I like my landing pages to be non-scrolling, so I can get the jist of it in 'one-look'.

Also, your '15% discount' banner has a mouse rollover with a pointer, but nothing happens on click? It looks like its meant to be a link, but isn't.
 
I like it, very clean and stands out well. The "off-line" thing...Depending on how much you are going to be online I might get rid of it. Really don't care for those things when they are always off-line. But, if you use it great.

CMONOVA, you might want to look at the sites on your signatute, one of them has a malware warning on WOT, not very good if ever linked to the Association of Computer Repair Business Owners


Thanks
 
Very clean and basic.

It seems your logo gets cut off at the top though, and its not easy to distinguish what your site is 'bout via first glance.

As a personal preference, I like my landing pages to be non-scrolling, so I can get the jist of it in 'one-look'.

Also, your '15% discount' banner has a mouse rollover with a pointer, but nothing happens on click? It looks like its meant to be a link, but isn't.

Agree with logo be proud if it, display in with pride.

As for the second opinion it's hard sometimes to do this even with auto adjusting sites, as everyone's monitor is different.

Things I would do:

In the title of your Site change it from:
Code:
<title>BrotherTech LLC | BrotherTech LLC provides in-home and remote support for home and business users.</title>

to

Code:
<title>BrotherTech LLC | Remote Computer Support Specialist in {city, or state, or country}</title>

Like with my website it's
BenchTech | Computer repair in {city}

Why becuase it helps with SEO (search engine optimization) took me from number 15 to number 6 in 2 weeks.
 
CMONOVA, you might want to look at the sites on your signatute, one of them has a malware warning on WOT, not very good if ever linked to the Association of Computer Repair Business Owners


Thanks

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Warning: Keep out. IP/Hostname/Website containing harmful code that can seriously compromise the victim-system and damage the integrity/reliability of the data stored on it. For any question, reference to this user: http://www.mywot.com/en/user/915771.

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  • shazza 07/13/2010
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VirTool VBInject see
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Yep. Needs your attention.
 
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