Need Help in Website Designing

[Amit]

Hi Guys,
I have a website which I designed with the help of a local designer earlier but it was not good and I have to remove that website from the server. For now, I have downloaded a template from the internet and did some changes to that and It's live on www.worldofmobile.com.au.
My question is for mates who have experience in designing. Do I change the images on this website or shall I start designing the new website? Coz people are coming to my website per no one is making a call or booking an appointment.
Please help.
Thanks in Advance.

 

[Slaters Kustum Machines]

I'm having a hard time understanding the text. I take it English is not your native language. For example on the homepage is "We offer computer repair services and that too at cheapest rates in town". I would word it more like "We offer computer repair services for a low rate". Although, being the cheapest in town will typically bring you clients that want cheap service and don't value your work.

 

[glennd]

Hi Guys,
I have a website which I designed with the help of a local designer earlier but it was not good and I have to remove that website from the server. For now, I have downloaded a template from the internet and did some changes to that and It's live on www.worldofmobile.com.au.
My question is for mates who have experience in designing. Do I change the images on this website or shall I start designing the new website? Coz people are coming to my website per no one is making a call or booking an appointment.
Please help.
Thanks in Advance.

I'm a bit confused. You have this on the front page, "World of Mobile offers affordable website design and development services. Whether it's complex website or a simple one, we have solution for everyone. Our website design and development plans start from just $150."

 

[Amit]

Hi Glennd,

Yes, because I have some freelancers working for me and I offer web design services to my clients as well.
I think I should remove that and put that somewhere on the inner page?

Also, does the website good enough for computer and mobile repairs ?

Thanks in advance.

Regards,

 

[Amit]

Hi Slaters Kustum Machines,

Yes, you are right English is not my native language but I used the word cheap for SEO, as Google says cheapest computer repair is searched more.
I understand that this keyword will also bring me customers who do not give value to work and just need the stuff done at cheapest.

What is your opinion about the whole website? Is it good enough for computer and mobile repairs?
Thanks in Advance.

Regards,

 

[MCDIT]

By good enough do you mean to ask, "is it good enough as it is?" or "is the layout good enough?".

I would say the template itself looks good, but it appears to be very incomplete. The main sliding image is a little cheesy I find. The "what clients say" section is a little bland and the default images don't add to it. (The name "Ron" doesn't pair well with the face of a woman!). You have mention of Amazon, Discovery channel etc further down the page. Have you done work for these? Have you really won 16 awards?

I mean no harm of course, but the language is a big factor. The site doesn't come across as trustworthy. A couple of the reviews you have under "Why choose us?" are very similar in language to the rest of the page. Were these real reviews?