Flyer Critique

[Steve202]

I've redesigned my flyer to match my new website design which I'm looking to launch on the new year.

Anyway what are peoples opinions of my flyer?
Click Me

What would you change? The only thing I'm not 100% sure on in the bottom part in the green box, anyone got any ideas?

It will be printed on A5 and also in a local magazine.

Cheers

 

[jfm]

I think it looks good, and I agree with you for the green bottom part.
Could use another color or design. (white?)

I never liked the "friendly" attribute, Your local computer guy sounds friendly enough to me.

You did not include anything about onsite service, wich I think is important if you do onsite calls.

 

[SprinterTech-WI]

Only thing I see additionally is it says: Our Services includes
when it should say: Our Services include
No "S" at the end

 

[Steve202]

Thanks for the input so far. I might drop the friendly part after all, I'll sleep on it

Only thing I see additionally is it says: Our Services includes
when it should say: Our Services include
No "S" at the end

haha, me and the girlfriend was debating that. I said services include, but she says services includes

 

[SprinterTech-WI]

Thanks for the input so far. I might drop the friendly part after all, I'll sleep on it



haha, me and the girlfriend was debating that. I said services include, but she says services includes

Well I would say here in the US - English....

Our Services Include:
pc repair
laptop repair
yada yada yada

Our Tune Up Service Includes:
Virus removal
Trojan Removal
Registry Cleaner
yada yada yada

but the double "s" 's are redundant so I would probably drop the last one, but then again our use of the English language over here is a little more screwed up so take that with a grain or 5 of salt lol

 

[SupportCover.com]

Thanks for the input so far. I might drop the friendly part after all, I'll sleep on it



haha, me and the girlfriend was debating that. I said services include, but she says services includes

Hi Steve,

I would drop the friendly part, everyone can claim to be friendly but if you come across a real pain of a customer it can be difficult to stay friendly

What about using the work qualified, or recommended. You could be recommended by the majority of your clients. Sounds better imo

Hope this helps.

 

[Steve202]

Thanks for the suggestions everyone. I've made changes and it looks a lot better now

 

[jrl2222]

If it was me I would try to spell the website address correctly at the bottom. Just how I would go though.

 

[TheITMan]

you beat me to it with the spelling of the website. All together this is a pretty good flyer. Good luck

 

[Steve202]

If it was me I would try to spell the website address correctly at the bottom. Just how I would go though.

Yeah I noticed that just before I sent it off to the printers