Critique on my Facebook Page

[MikeLierman]

I've have spent some time polishing my Facebook page. I have a couple links of the left, one of them, when someone likes the page, it allows them to sign up for a free computer tune-up. Just wondering what you guys think about my page.

Also looking to get over 25 likes so my page can be viewed by people who aren't logged in.

Thanks!

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Invise-Solutions/193673131881

 

[callthatgirl]

I liked! Do I get a tune up?

 

[MikeLierman]

I liked! Do I get a tune up?

That reminds me of something interesting. A guy called me and asked what a free tune-up "entails." I'm not doing anything less than what I normally do, which is an extensive diagnosis of the software, and hardware of the machine and how it can be made faster, cleaning of the registry, virus scan, disk clean up, remove start up entries, disable unneeded services, registry tweaks, etc. Tried to explain to him, and he said "Oh so basically you do everything that CrapCleaner does?" and I'm like "Uhhh... no." And his reply was "Well I think I can handle the tune-up myself." *click* He hung up. lol. I just started laughing.

 

[cmonova]

I like it. You should make the Free PC Tune-up the main page someone goes to vice the wall.

 

[Xander]

Also looking to get over 25 likes so my page can be viewed by people who aren't logged in.

I'm your 25th...
You can return the favour.


In the Page settings, you can dictate which part comes up first (Info, Wall, Tuneup...) I'd recommend one other than Wall.

 

[MikeLierman]

I like it. You should make the Free PC Tune-up the main page someone goes to vice the wall.

The only problem I could see with that is that returning users would see the free tune-up page even after they have already filled in the offer and gotten their tune-up.
Edit: Okay that's not true. I just checked, if you're not a fan, the default page shows correctly as the free tune up tab, but once a fan, the default tab is the wall, which I could change the default page for fans...