Craigslist ad critique

[bytebuster]

http://sacramento.craigslist.org/cps/2589991778.html

I followed jeubank's suggestions, and focused on keywords. CL doesn't allow post renewals for services in my area, so I will have to repost it every week. So far, no replies, so I'm looking for assistance from those who have experience in CL advertising.

 

[cmonova]

Good content but I would do an image with the same material on it and when they click it they go directly to your website.

 

[bytebuster]

Good content but I would do an image with the same material on it and when they click it they go directly to your website.

I'm aiming for searchability, and an image doesn't give me that. Since there's so many computer businesses posting, I am betting on people using the search function. That advice was on the "Craigslist & You" thread in advertising discussion.

 

[cmonova]

Actually you do get the searchability if you use a proper title. Plus the search engines pick it up based on the title also. I've been using
Craigslist for about 6 years now and typically an image works better than just plain text. But, try both and see for yourself there are alot
of others in Sacramento that have images in their post.

 

[bytebuster]

Revised ad:

http://sacramento.craigslist.org/cps/2593677989.html

Changed title to something more searchable, and moved phone number to top.