Biz Card critiques POR FAVOR!

[Tiddle]

im trying to get my domain set up right now.
I got one for like $10 bucks w and email.
For now im just going to leave these like this im not getting many printed out between 500-1000
When im about to run out ill probably design myself a simpler one. Im just waiting to get photoshop again.

 

[l337]

with adobe relasing cs4 if u become desperate its amazing what u can do with a 30 day trial and i dun mean illegal use i mean 30 days with photoshop u can get alot of shiz done xD