What do you think?

[zwonga.com]

Hi All,

I would really like to know what you think of my Business card and Flyer I have been using for a little while. Please note that these images include a extra 3mm around the edges for the trim.

Business Card Front


Business Card Back.


Flyer Front


Flyer Back


Thanks
Mike

 

[kotarel]

1st: The website name catches the eye, I find this a good thing.

2nd: Makes me wonder what kind of service sells at that low starting price. A good thing to get calls and have a chance to present your prices / services.

3rd: I am not a fan of pink, but I must admit it does a good job.

4th: Facebook, Twitter is nice to have.

5th: Looks very professional, I would call if I was a end user.

The only real thing I could give you advice on it, is to maybe personalise the cards with your name on it. Doesn't need to be done with the other things, but I think business cards need them as it is your contact information that you hand over to people and without a name it feels generic.

My 0.02$.

 

[Carl]

Very sharp looking - give kudo's to the designer.

The "Pink" lettering on the business card and front of flier would be a concern to me, think you may be better off going with yellow or maybe a neon green - to stand out a little more. - Or outlining the letters to bring then out more.

Don't know if I'd put a price on the card - Esp. that low. (I would be wondering what I got for 6.25 - since that's lower than my bench charge).

Instead of "Call Us On" - perhaps "Phone" or "Call"
(Remember KISS - "Keep It Simple Simon")

On the back of the flier "Does My PC Need a Health check" should be a louder/more eye grabbing color rather than so passive.

What I want to convey is "PC Repair" and "Phone Number"
Who what where when and Why...

Good Luck, very nice presentation.

 

[Tony_Scarpelli]

Awesome, I like it a lot. You are off to a good start.

I don't have my name on my business cards as I planned for all employees to hand them out and didn't want to print out 250, 500 of each employee.

But, also it is a PITA to not have my name on the cards so eventually you may want both a generic card all your employees hand out and then a private card with your personal cell phone on for you hand out.

I think i get more women calls than men. So an attractive to women advertisement is a very smart idea. anything you can do to lesson the trepidation some feel towards technology will make them call you IMO.

I use a puppy dog... I know it seems stupid but it was recommended by a TOP ad agent who handled Ebays account at a top ad agency.


Flyer- I want people to come in of course, so a freebie gets their attention. So I offer a service they wouldn't normally require unless they already performed another service for which I charge.

So example I might give a free backup service (I would charge for the repair fix or re installation of their system at regular price) This is a $100 value.

I am a recycle-r so I once put "free monitor, keyboard and mouse" to all customers before July 16th (about 3 weeks). many people responded in but few wanted the free recycled stuff.

I also offer a free pickup and delivery for first time customers valued at $49.99 each or $99.98 for both.

of course all free services are with repair.

I find I get better luck when I have four discounts or freebies to choose from. Some want free pickup, some want free antivirus scan, some want free keyboard, some want free backup. But my response for flyers is higher when I have more than one offer. All are with service or repair.

 

[erb]

These are excellent. I understood exactly who you were and what you did as well as why I needed your service. I felt like I was getting an excellent value due to the way you laid out Flyer New Back jpg. The referral card is money in the bank too.

 

[erb]

Awesome, I like it a lot. You are off to a good start.

I don't have my name on my business cards as I planned for all employees to hand them out and didn't want to print out 250, 500 of each employee.

But, also it is a PITA to not have my name on the cards so eventually you may want both a generic card all your employees hand out and then a private card with your personal cell phone on for you hand out.

I think i get more women calls than men. So an attractive to women advertisement is a very smart idea. anything you can do to lesson the trepidation some feel towards technology will make them call you IMO.

I use a puppy dog... I know it seems stupid but it was recommended by a TOP ad agent who handled Ebays account at a top ad agency.


Flyer- I want people to come in of course, so a freebie gets their attention. So I offer a service they wouldn't normally require unless they already performed another service for which I charge.

So example I might give a free backup service (I would charge for the repair fix or re installation of their system at regular price) This is a $100 value.

I am a recycle-r so I once put "free monitor, keyboard and mouse" to all customers before July 16th (about 3 weeks). many people responded in but few wanted the free recycled stuff.

I also offer a free pickup and delivery for first time customers valued at $49.99 each or $99.98 for both.

of course all free services are with repair.

I find I get better luck when I have four discounts or freebies to choose from. Some want free pickup, some want free antivirus scan, some want free keyboard, some want free backup. But my response for flyers is higher when I have more than one offer. All are with service or repair.

Very sound advice. Offering free services as no cost extras on paid services is a very great way to make something out of nothing.

 

[Tony_Scarpelli]

Very sound advice. Offering free services as no cost extras on paid services is a very great way to make something out of nothing.

Also, only one free item per transaction. They can't get free pickup, free backup, and free drop off at the same transaction. Although if their total is over $200 I might be persuaded to give a 2nd freebie. I shoot for an average repair around $200-220.