recently joined the chamber of commerce, need help with my 30 second intro

[nesrinamb]

I recently joined the local chamber of commerce (500 member group) I will get the chance to introduce my self at the monthly lunch meeting this Wednesday.

I get 30 seconds to introduce myself to an audience of 70 - 100 members and non members bust mostly business .

I really need some help on how to introduce myself and what to mention.

This is currently what I have:

Good afternoon everybody its great to be here, I'm Nestor Rincon the owner of Rincon Dynamic computer repair. The main goal of my company apart from providing the best possible service, is to get computers, and computer networks up and running as soon as possible. My job is to worry about your computer problems so that you dont have to.

 

[xxsilk109xx]

i assume you have other pc repair shops that are chamber members? Think of what you might do different than them to set yourself apart and go from there.

ie, i offer free pickup and delivery, etc.

 

[RichmondTech]

Feel free to take anything that is beneficial to you.

http://www.technibble.com/forums/showpost.php?p=227901&postcount=3

 

[nesrinamb]

thanks guys i really appreciate the feed back

 

[rapidcom]

i assume you have other pc repair shops that are chamber members? Think of what you might do different than them to set yourself apart and go from there.

ie, i offer free pickup and delivery, etc.

I'm in a chamber with about 2400+ members and I'm pretty much the only computer repair company, that's actully active I guess.