Please let me know if my websites decent?
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PCX
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Well, its a bit slow and loads choppy.
The image on the home page is of very low quality.
You will need some more content on your home page for SEO optimization.
Your keywords for your meta tags should not repeat as they do.
Your title would be better optimized if it included what you do for the area you work in. Order of words show importance. For instance, mine is "Compute Repair - Jacksonville NC - The PC Exchange" The most important words are computer repair, then the location, and very very very last the business name"
The text on the service page is poorly managed. You need more of a gap between the text and the edge of the content box.
The images on the service page need to have transparent backgrounds. You may be able to get away with borders on some of them.
If I get more time or as you change things, I will try and comment more.
EDIT: I would also separate some of your more prominent services on their own pages for SEO optimization.
The image on the home page is of very low quality.
You will need some more content on your home page for SEO optimization.
Your keywords for your meta tags should not repeat as they do.
Your title would be better optimized if it included what you do for the area you work in. Order of words show importance. For instance, mine is "Compute Repair - Jacksonville NC - The PC Exchange" The most important words are computer repair, then the location, and very very very last the business name"
The text on the service page is poorly managed. You need more of a gap between the text and the edge of the content box.
The images on the service page need to have transparent backgrounds. You may be able to get away with borders on some of them.
If I get more time or as you change things, I will try and comment more.
EDIT: I would also separate some of your more prominent services on their own pages for SEO optimization.
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PCX
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. . . im not interested in seo anymore but thanks for all the great advice
Why?
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PCX
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Because i don't know how to do that stuff grrrr
Even more reason to be concerned about it? If it were not for SEO optimization, I would probably not be in business . . . If nothing else, I would most certainly not be doing as well as I am now. Do some research and get on the ball with it. It will take at least a few months to see any real results (unless you have no competition with SEO optimized sites) but if you don't start now, you will really be kicking your self in the future. It literally could make or break your business.
PCX
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Its going to cost you a lot of money and from the looks of it, you are just starting out, so I am guessing you probably have some down time. I suggest you use that down time wisely and work on your SEO. But, to each his own.
Yes, it does look better. But I believe that this statement on your About Us Page sends the wrong message
To me, it says, inexperienced, cheap, desperate, fly by night.
Every time I read statements like "small company" with "low overhead" or things like "pass the savings to you" that is what I think of. With that statement, you will attract a lot of cheap residential customers, but you will not attract too many customers with money or many businesses (unless they are cheap) for that matter.
Customers that you are going to want to grow your business with, are those that understand that you get what you pay for. Also these same types of customers are those who will probably want to deal with a well established business or at least one that appears to be well established.
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PCX
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Honestly, I am no expert on About Us pages, I would suggest doing some research on that. But I do know a few things about making your business appear successful and established, even if your not. Often times when you are first starting out, appearing to be successful, well established and busy, will in turn make your business, successful, well established and busy.
Appearance is not everything, but its a huge part of becoming a successful business.
Appearance is not everything, but its a huge part of becoming a successful business.
PCX
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Just redo it. I would keep hashing it out (speak it out) till you come up with something both easy to read (say) and understand. When you do revise it though, and you will more than likely revise it several times, keep each revision. You may come up with something that does not work in one place, but when tweaked works in another. Each time you revise it and after you think you have the final product, make sure you speak it out and make sure that it sounds natural.
It's very difficult to take you seriously when every other sentence ends with "lol" and some of the posts are littered with txt speak or no capitalization.
Website itself looks decent, though I personally hate sites where everything is on the same "page" and the content just slides away. I'd recommend a little more padding on your navigation buttons.
Website itself looks decent, though I personally hate sites where everything is on the same "page" and the content just slides away. I'd recommend a little more padding on your navigation buttons.
I would never do lol on my website tho so im just happy actually
well the stuff ur talking about i dont know how to change
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Your phone number needs to be at the top of every page. Don't force me to search for it. And the keyboard background makes it difficult to read your name. Make sure that doesn't happen to your phone number.
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