new business card what do people think

[Rosco]

i want to retool my business card i have gone through a few drafts and this is what i am leaning toward any advice or idea would be greatly appreciated! Thank you TN members

 

[roborobs computer repair]

you may want to work on the formatting of your phone number and where does the bar-code on the back lead the user to?

 

[16k_zx81]

I just don't understand people insisting on considering using business cards that look home-made.

This kind of thing is cute with "cottage industries" like people who make preserves, or do palm readings.

If you imagine travelling to a lawyer's office in the main street of your town:You're about to walk in and you notice that he's signage has been done with a spray can.

Not exactly confidence-inspiring.

Specifics:

Mixed fonts
No commercial logo
Aspect ratio of the laptop is very skewed
Poor quality image (blurred)
I don't understand the relevance of a 'blue flame' to computer repairs services

TBH I would not use something that looked like this and I would not advise another business owner to.

 

[colonydata]

I just don't understand people insisting on considering using business cards that look home-made.

This kind of thing is cute with "cottage industries" like people who make preserves, or do palm readings.

If you imagine travelling to a lawyer's office in the main street of your town:You're about to walk in and you notice that he's signage has been done with a spray can.

Not exactly confidence-inspiring.

Specifics:

Mixed fonts
No commercial logo
Aspect ratio of the laptop is very skewed
Poor quality image (blurred)
I don't understand the relevance of a 'blue flame' to computer repairs services

TBH I would not use something that looked like this and I would not advise another business owner to.

agree with this ive found its best to KISS(Keep it simple stupid)

 

[AlphaCS]

You are shooting yourself in the foot every time you had that out. Let me know if you need any design work.


Also your bulk hours make no sense on your website. It more expensive to buy 10 hours than 3. Should it not be the other way around? Website overall looks much better. Can you make the side menus clickable.

 

[Thedog]

I need to be honest on this one, really ugly...

Why have a computer on it? No need to be overexplicit about what you do, just looks cheap to be honest.

Name, number, e-mail, homepage... clean (max 4-5 colors) and no pictures, thats a selling card

 

[Rosco]

this is my old card i would need to update the url and stuff like that but do people like that better? i know its a old card but it gives you the idea

 

[Rosco]

By the way i appreciate everyone opinions. I really respect everyone ideas! I made a lot of changes to my website. I finally found a wp theme that i like because of the support everyone gave me! Anyways thanks again

 

[cprompt]

this is my old card i would need to update the url and stuff like that but do people like that better? i know its a old card but it gives you the idea

I have to say I like this one better than the new. It seems less cluttered to me and easier to find the information I want.

Brian.


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[Rosco]

thanks Brian your opinion is appreciated i think i might stick with that one i think the new would stick out i guess that is not the case. well glad i asked everyone before i made a terrible mistake.

 

[16k_zx81]

thanks Brian your opinion is appreciated i think i might stick with that one i think the new would stick out i guess that is not the case. well glad i asked everyone before i made a terrible mistake.

Actually I would suggest that using either design would qualify.

Throw me $30 via paypal and I will make u one

 

[16k_zx81]

Got bored.

Design 1

Design 2