MSP Brochure critique

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I'm getting ready to do a big MSP sales push and my graphic designer came back with this. What do you guys think? This is a trifold brochure. Brochure.jpg Brochure2.jpg
 
I like the layout but the white letters on the lime green background can be brutal to read. I guess it will read better if the client is physically holding the brochure in their hand.
 
Visually...layed out nicely.
One quick thought..the graphic in upper right corner...blade servers...that's more enterprise feature, not so much SMB which is the market you're after.

Totally agree about white font on the kermit green...I can't read it on my laptop.

What else will you do for them? Pitch on things you'll do that mean something to them, if you're selling all you can eat plans...they want more than just patching and that so called log reading. They want to know you'll answer calls for every day tasks....hired a new user, upgrade software, install new printer, secure user accounts from staff turnover, etc.

We also laid out a couple of different MSP plans in a little chart....from ala cart...to hybrid...to ayce.
Giving a choice.
 
I'm going to get a paper proof before any final printing gets done. I'm thinking the green will not be quite the same on paper.

Very good point on the content YeOldeStonecat. I'm going to work on that a bit. I have some free space on the back panel, maybe that's a good place to put a chart. I'll play around with it.
 
What do you think of these content rewrites?

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