Critique my website

Eanix

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Hey guys,

I created my website in Wordpress, changing around a theme from one of those wordpress theme sites.

I was hoping to get some insight. What's good, bad, and ugly? I'm open to ANY advice so be as harsh as needed.

http://www.eanixsystems.com

Thanks in advance,

-Amro
 
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A link, like this one, would have made it easier.

I took a quick look at your site, and I liked the overall appearance and navigation. Based on a very quick look, the only thing I might mention is that I would have the categories (Home | Services | Hardware Repair | etc.) function as links as well. Right now they bring up a menu, but don't function as links themselves. Its not a huge deal, imo, but its a pet peeve of mine, especially when my mouse acts like it should be a link.
 
I have been through every page on your site.
personally i love the layout and organization of everything.
I found what I thought were a few errors.

Under the hardware repair menus all of the subtitle and description paragraphs are the same, stating that you do apple repairs with HQ OEM parts.

In the windows and mac repair services the descriptions are all in what looks like spanish to me.

In the windows pc screen repairs prices listings it says that the cost includes parts and labor. But above the picture it says parts value may be different, just a little confusing.

I tested the site on the latest Chrome and IE installs, the main page live content (banner pics and twitter feed) were significantly slower to load on IE. Even with a fresh cache dump on Chrome.

Over all again i love the lay out. I will soon be PMing you about the site and building one. Mine is pretty pitiful, i have never been one for web design or marketing.
 
Took a quick look in safari on an iPad. Looks nice. Clean and easy to read. Good logo. On the splash - if the 3 info boxes could be the same height that'd look better. Overall quite nice.

I clicked on Residential. The main body of text is centered while the rest is flush left. (I have some background in graphic design- sorry). Design-wise it's preferred to keep the alignment consistent. You might try making it two columns, flush left, rather than stacking the paragraphs. If you don't care for that look then go back to the centered alignment. When you start a new paragraph, as under Data Transfer, just add a line space between them instead of the single space indent.
 
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1. Looks great and professional.

2. You can make it better by using your own photos rather than clip art and other folks logos on the flash presentation.

3. As proud owners we want to list our features but marketers tell us to always list benefits not features.

4. Black is attractive, dramatic, emotional and draws you in but I prefer light back grounds around the sides and edges.
 
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