Business sign critique

[tankman1989]

I'm thinking of posting a simple sign and I've been a little stressed about what to put on it.

Here is what I came up with.

I don't know what to put for web services (hosting, development, design, management, etc). I have to keep it short to keep it in the space and website is the only thing that fits.

I think the colors work as I only have the choice of red and black, so I figure I want to accentuate the main service (Computer Services) and my domain, because my phone number is on the domain and I'd rather them look at the website to get info instead of always calling - or - should I focus on getting calls so I can show that I offer quality customer service and I can talk to them about their needs?

 

[jfm]

I would remove the 3rd line (network, website)
Since the 4th line (technology consultant is resuming that ?)


Else, I think the typo looks good,
And as in any good plublicity, keeping it short and sweet is the key.

jf

 

[JustInspired]

I think there is too much to read, all crammed together.
How big will this sign be and is it something that will be glanced at briefly or will it be in a place where people will be standing or sitting?

 

[nlinecomputers]

This is a sign on what? Your office? A billboard? Side of your service vehicle? That sign looks way to crammed and suffers from the laundry list problem. Signs need to be K.I.S.S. or they just put people off.