Business card critique please

[fergeeks]

In the process of starting a mobile computer repair business in town.
If you could offer some hints/advice on my business card design that would be fantastic thanks.

 

[Martyn]

I keep mine minimal on the front side and put my services on the rear. I personally think it's too much for the front.

 

[fergeeks]

I was thinking the same thing thanks Martyn.

I keep mine minimal on the front side and put my services on the rear. I personally think it's too much for the front.

 

[glennd]

i like minimal. btw when did "web design" become one word?

 

[fergeeks]

i like minimal. btw when did "web design" become one word?

Ha, never but this was created in the wee hours of the morning so please forgive me.

 

[fergeeks]

Okay how about this.

On the back I have a list of services.

 

[Markverhyden]

Looks nice.

1. To be honest I'd drop the downunder thing unless you are Australian or a New Zealander.

2. Just Owner if you want a title. You are not a commercial driver or equipment operator. I have not title on mine.

3. Nice looking background. How did you do that? Just snap a picture of a MB and then fade it out a lot?

 

[fergeeks]

Looks nice.

1. To be honest I'd drop the downunder thing unless you are Australian or a New Zealander.

2. Just Owner if you want a title. You are not a commercial driver or equipment operator. I have not title on mine.

3. Nice looking background. How did you do that? Just snap a picture of a MB and then fade it out a lot?

Points taken thanks

I am actually a New Zealander living in the US; so I think Downunder would work in this situation.

I took a high res photo of a motherboard and changed the opacity.

 

[Markverhyden]

Points taken thanks

I am actually a New Zealander living in the US; so I think Downunder would work in this situation.

I took a high res photo of a motherboard and changed the opacity.

In that case it's a nice and unique differentiator.

 

[glennd]

Ha, never but this was created in the wee hours of the morning so please forgive me.

you're forgiven O-) i'm never sure these days, new hybrid words like that seem to materialise out of nowhere.

i like the kiwi, is that your drawing?

 

[fergeeks]

you're forgiven O-) i'm never sure these days, new hybrid words like that seem to materialise out of nowhere.

i like the kiwi, is that your drawing?

Unfortunately I cannot draw to save a life; he is pretty cool though.

 

[cypress]

I think the drawing is funny and catchy. I love it. I like the new front design. Not too crazy about the back design.

 

[Xander]

I would ditch the QR code (they still haven't caught on), move the logo to the upper-right and expand the logo and info sections some.

 

[TenYardFight]

I hate QR codes and advise clients against them for almost every instance, but we are putting them on our new cards. "Scan here to automatically add me to your contacts."