Brochure critique

[Tretech]

I created this brochure to be printed and dropped off at prospective business clients during a cold-call.

I'm aware of the small return on cold-calling, but I would like to have a brochure to give along with my business card.

Please give me all opinions. I can take it.

http://www.tre-tech.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/Flyer.pdf

Thanks,
Tim

 

[jfm]

Publisher 2007 ?

I don't like the choice of colors.

The squares around the Microsoft certs are, well, you know.
Go Illustrator of Photoshop at least.

But I do think the idea is good

JF

 

[acscva]

A few things....you used the word "support" 18 times on this flyer. Not good. Also very wordy....and the use of the 3 "Microsoft Certified" is confusing.

My recommendation is to find a good local graphic designer and pay them a couple hundred dollars to design you a professional flyer. In the long run it will pay off and get you more business than a non-professional designed flyer....take this from experience as I use to design these flyers myself back 15+ years ago and now only let the professionals do it.

 

[imageblur]

I vote for what acscva said. Get a professional. You don't want your first impression to be a bad one.

 

[Magic Miguel]

If you want an honest opinion it looks horrible. I would take a template or maybe hire someone to do it for you. I hope you take this as constructive criticism.

 

[CLC]

If you want an honest opinion it looks horrible. I would take a template or maybe hire someone to do it for you. I hope you take this as constructive criticism.

I would never call you if I got this flyer, I would outsource it. Not trying to give you hell, just looking out for your best interests.

 

[Scales]

My eyes......................

 

[nonchalant]

I dunno where to look...

 

[Martyn]

I'm with the majority, if you have no design skills(I haven't nor have you ) get a professional to do it. A few months ago I got a flyer designed for less that £100 and I was amazed at the submissions. I used www.vworker.com recommended by someone on here.

 

[Tretech]

Thanks for all of the constructive criticism. I don't have any misconceptions as to my designing ability, but thought I would give it a shot. Now to find a local designer.