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Old 04-27-2012, 02:46 AM
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Align your "book now" buttons even if you have to throw a few <br > under the descriptions.
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I think i need some logos or something on my social media and email setup page, it's too plain.
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have to say the few things PCX mentioned made a big difference though
I plan to have him tear my site apart...I mean critique my site whenever I get around to building it.
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Old 04-27-2012, 02:52 AM
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I plan to have him tear my site apart...I mean critique my site whenever I get around to building it.
Lol, you guys make me sound so mean . . .
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Lol, you guys make me sound so mean . . .
LOL, goes with the formal apology thread I guess.
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I agree with PCX's comment about the alignment of the boxes on the front page.

Also, this needs to be edited

Slaterís Kustum Machines is a locally owned computer repair business that specializes in PC and laptop repair and maintenance. We Also build custom computers to suit your specific needs. If you need a maintenance or complete protection plan give us a call today.


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