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Old 02-28-2012, 04:21 AM
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Default My wife put this together on Photoshop, what do you think?



I just wanted to see what you guys think of the business card design she put together earlier. I am getting close to launching the business and I need your input!
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Old 02-28-2012, 04:25 AM
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Tell her I said this an not you . . . . Its not readable or clean enough. Plus it looks dated.
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Old 02-28-2012, 04:31 AM
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She took it pretty well, I'll see if she has something else to give me to post in a moment. Btw thanks for the blunt honesty
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Old 02-28-2012, 04:32 AM
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She took it pretty well, I'll see if she has something else to give me to post in a moment. Btw thanks for the blunt honesty
LOL, your the only one so far on here who has thanked me for that. Your welcome!
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Old 02-28-2012, 04:34 AM
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Id rather you tell me I have it wrong now, then to be wrong down the line and already running If you catch my drift.
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Side question but do you really need to put a fax# on a business card anymore? Even if you've still got an antique machine in your office, do you want to advertise that you still use it? ("I'm all about cutting edge tech but here's how to reach me via morse code.")

Other than that, PCX's words ring true. The text on the right is entirely washed out. Maybe if the font were bigger and she put a black edge around the letters to make them stand out a little more.
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Thats exactly how I feel.
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Heres a question, do you have a website yet?
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I don't have a website up and running just yet. I have been poking around and debating if I wan't to have someone put it together for me. Or just buy a kit that is pre-designed.

As far as the fax goes, I know it is outdated tech but its pretty common in this area to put your fax number on the business card.
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The reason why I ask, is because you want everything to be as consistent as possible. Branding and recognition is important. So you may want to get a nice template that you feel best fits your company and personality and then base your card on that.
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