WIP My Site

[Paul Rodgers]

I have a good chunk of my site done and I need another set of eyes to point out my mistakes and any changes that should be made. I know the services and contact pages have the same content as the index page, but right now I need a bit of a break.

http://pritechs.com/index.html

The username is "preview" and the password is "Preview1".

Please let me know what to correct and improve upon and remove.

[16k_zx81]

1. HOME page space is not being adequately utilised. This is the prime real-estate of your website. You may only get less than 5 seconds to hook the customer in before s/he moves to the next google result. Images, eye-catching offers and deals, benefits of using your service, CALLS TO ACTION.

2. The site looks dated / retro - not in a good way - to me (sorry)

3. Would like to see more use of color, images, eye-catching offers, deals, benefits.

Consider implementing some of these ideas...http://boagworld.com/design/10-techn...all-to-action/


This package is pretty awesome for $7 (you get heaps of stuff with it, but the 2500 PLR graphics items are a great way to spruce up a site) http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...-graphics.html

Looks like (some of the 2500)
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/h...theesdad/2.png
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/h...theesdad/3.png
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/h...theesdad/4.png

[tobey]

Something must be wrong. The site looks...broken.

[Paul Rodgers]

Originally Posted by 16k_zx81

2. The site looks dated / retro - not in a good way - to me (sorry)

Is it the template or is it ineffective layout and content?

Edit - From looking at things the template is a problem. Looks like it is time for plan b.

[Paul Rodgers]

Here is a completely new design done by Bryan Vest. http://www.bryanvest.com/pri/

I like this design a lot, but I also want some feedback just to make this thing look perfect.