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Old 02-26-2010, 12:28 AM
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I just launched my website...cp3technologies dot com. Let me know what you think.
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The color scheme is good, and I really like the logo. The first thing I notice is the centered alignment on your landing page. I would change the text alignment to justified or left, depending on how your containers are setup.

In your page title, make sure you include the name of your company, rather than just Home, Services, etc. This will improve your SEO.

Since you have a contact form, I would not list an email address on your site. It's sure to get picked up by spam harvesters. Your contact form needs CAPTCHA to reduce the amount of form spam you receive. You might look into reCaptcha for a free solution.

A few floated images might bring a little more eye-appeal.

In your header, you have two containers for the header content. The first is the dark gray wrapper, and the second is the light gray box. I would add a third container with a white background and rounded corners to fill all but 10 pixels of the light gray box, making a border around it. This would eliminate the boxy look of your logo. The light gray box should be extended to the right so it has the same size margins on both sides.
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Old 02-26-2010, 01:32 AM
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thanks sj....It may take me a month to figure out your recommendations.
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No problem, I know my pointers can be a little long-winded and hard to understand. I've always been a better technical writer than a teacher. Give me an engineering process and I can write something that's understandable.

Nevertheless, web development is really where my talent lies. I'll be happy to give you some pointers if you need more specific help.
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Looks nice and simple.

your bullet points are left justified but the text is centered when the page first loads in FF. Once i have navigated around your site and returned to the home page, the text has re adjusted itself to line up with the bullet points.

Good work.
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Thanks for the feedback...Im working on the suggestions.
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With website tonight you have the option to remove the GoDaddy logo at the bottom of your page. I would do that.

You have lots of good suggestions already. Congratulations on starting your own business!

Edited to add: I LOVE LOVE LOVE your logo.
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thanks OT....I just removed the GoDaddy banner...I will publish it after I make a few more changes...
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I like the logo as well. I was going to mention aligning the text but someone beat me to it. I would also try to make your header image encompass the entire area rather than just having it sit to the left side.

Also, you have some good information on your home page but it seems to be unorganized to me. Maybe there is a better way you can present it all.

Good job again with the logo. Did you design it yourself?
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the layout is good, I've seen that template with another member here in Technibble. Get rid of the godaddy logo.
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