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Old 05-09-2012, 03:12 PM
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I am getting some ads designed for use in online classified ads as well as possibly other uses such as physical flyers. I have two samples so far and I would appreciate any feedback on design, copy or anything that comes to mind.

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I like the first one the best. My only thought is that you might want to either add or replace one of the four services listed with "PC Tune Up." That is by far our biggest seller.

One other thing. You might want to take out the free advice. For many customers, they take that to mean you'll fix it for free over the phone or something.

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Old 05-09-2012, 07:17 PM
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I agree with the above. The first one works with your logo colors and free advice will be abused.
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Just to add I agree with the above
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I like the 2nd flyer, the color is more "alive" and it has a good looking fellow that will smile over your potential customer. then maybe add some A+, mcitp or mcse logos at the bottom, customers may not know what they are but it will give them the impression that you're professional and trustworthy.
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Thanks for the feedback. I will be taking your suggestions and making some modifications.
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