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Old 04-07-2012, 05:51 AM
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I finally put a logo together for myself, taking ideas from a few different places and put this together myself. As it stands, I can't really afford to pay for a logo to be done "professionally" even 48hr logo or such. I need something nice and eye-catching to slap on some new business cards and hand-outs.

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Old 04-07-2012, 02:56 PM
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Looks fine to me, I think you did quite a good job
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Looks good and would look good in print in black and white, only thing I would consider is not overlapping the text on top of the monitor base.
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I like it, too. Great work.

I will make one suggestion, I might tighten it up a bit, loose some of the dead space. Kernel the word solutions so it is no longer than the Stable PC above it, then see if you can shrink the swoosh to be just a little tighter to the rest of the logo than it is now.
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Thanks for the tips guys, I appreciate the feedback. I'll tweak it a bit more before slapping it on some PR materials =]
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I like it, too. Great work.

I will make one suggestion, I might tighten it up a bit, loose some of the dead space. Kernel the word solutions so it is no longer than the Stable PC above it, then see if you can shrink the swoosh to be just a little tighter to the rest of the logo than it is now.
I couldn't have said it better myself! Good input.
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Those are my favorite colors !
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Chose orange and blue because #1, Dark blue just pops nicely on nearly any backdrop you give it, and #2 because orange and blue are said to be the 2 colors that color blind people can identify (somehow...)
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I like the design, looks great.
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