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Old 04-06-2012, 02:49 AM
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Just finished designing flyer - going to try push my phone repair services out too, as there a big market for that at the moment, atleast in my region.

Idea is to catch the eye of passers by. This flyer will be for shop windows only. However may do a slightly modified version of this for door drops.


I value everyones opinion so feedback is welcome.


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Old 04-06-2012, 02:53 AM
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Appearing very bright for some reason - probably because i have the settings for print uploaded.

So please bear in mind it's not as bright and the white text is clearly visible in the printed version.
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Old 04-06-2012, 03:08 AM
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My first thought was that the white will be very hard to read but you seem to be convinced otherwise. Other than that it looks okay. I am not a huge fan of the light blue and white with black outline color scheme. The flyer itself gets the point across though.
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Old 04-06-2012, 03:41 PM
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Hi thanks. Any suggestions for the text and bg ?
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My problem is the lack of a logo. As it is currently it looks like a random flyer that may as well be a pizza tech. Put a logo on it and people will start to recognize your brand around town.
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I agree with the Brohodin. I assume you, like the rest of us spent a good amount of time on your logo. Your logo represents you! Put it on everything you can especially flyers! Other then that the flyer looks great!
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As it is currently it looks like a random flyer that may as well be a pizza tech.
I've seen pizza/craigslist techs with much nicer fliers.
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Old 04-06-2012, 11:08 PM
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I've seen pizza/craigslist techs with much nicer fliers.
Not sure whether to be upset by that comment

I will redesign it with my logo I originally didn't as my logo feels hard to fit in to an eye catching flyer. Will post redesign when done
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I've seen pizza/craigslist techs with much nicer fliers.
I only meant that there is little more than a website signalling that he's a legitimate business looking for legitimate customers.
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Ok so reworked it a little given the advice.

Thoughts on rework ?

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