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Old 03-31-2012, 01:29 PM
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On a normal size screen I like your new site. It looks pretty professional, and people I have talked to seem to like the sites where things are constantly changing and moving. I think your graphics are nice, and it "feels" like it is a high tech site which I feel is important for a tech business.

On a small screen (my iPhone), the old site actually looks better. The new one forces you to scroll forever to see the content.

Don't give up, I think you are on to something in your new design.
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Old 03-31-2012, 04:19 PM
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kelvren16 try this. I have changed the background color to match your site.
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@ trusted, so one of the things you are saying is that this should get cut right?Name:  ScreenShot084.jpg
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I'm going to try and make a longer banner for my logo thing at the top, because you guys are right, it "feels" a little small.

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what do you guys think of this for the banner at the top? I also changes the orange color in the site highlights and in the banner background so that it all matches. Better right?
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Old 04-04-2012, 10:43 PM
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It still does not quite flow. The corners make it look like you copy and pasted it on to the top of your page. Also, the services section looks cluttered.
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I like the site, the new one looks good imo. However, your last line in your quote.

"arent you lucky you found us"

You really should change that to

"we are really lucky you found us!"

or something similair. Make the customer feel warm and fuzzy!
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Old 04-05-2012, 09:55 PM
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how about something like this?
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that is much better
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you think so? For some reason it feels like its missing something. I think this looks a little better. What do you think?

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Old 04-06-2012, 01:50 PM
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you think so? For some reason it feels like its missing something. I think this looks a little better. What do you think?

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It may be missing something (the whole site needs a lot of work, as does mine so I am not judging) but its better than adding something that should not be there.
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