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Old 01-19-2009, 04:58 PM
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Default Biz Card critiques POR FAVOR!

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Would You Just Leave It As Is?






The flyers im getting done will have all the services i do.
So i really see no point in littering my card with them.
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I KNOW I KNOW. I already read the whole white text on black background. Im getting these done for free i dont want to complain too much.
Plz let me know if this has improved any.

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Old 01-19-2009, 05:01 PM
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Wow....looks cool.

Very tech, very pro.

If you have something else that will list your services, and you plan on doing some kind of referral program, then putting the referral form on the back would make sense.
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Old 01-19-2009, 05:10 PM
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The card looks very good and professional.

The only thing I can think of adding would be an address (Obviously if your working from home and you dont want everyone and their mother knowing your address then you wouldnt do that), so maybe whatever town/city/region you live/ work in so you don't get calls from people in places you would never travel to.
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Old 01-19-2009, 05:27 PM
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The card looks very good and professional.

The only thing I can think of adding would be an address (Obviously if your working from home and you dont want everyone and their mother knowing your address then you wouldnt do that), so maybe whatever town/city/region you live/ work in so you don't get calls from people in places you would never travel to.
Yeah im just starting out so im working from home.
Ive been just doing word of mouth work and its been going pretty good.
Im just going to pass out em around town so i highly doubt ill have someone from 100miles away'ville contacting me. So ill probably leave the address our city out!

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Wow....looks cool.

Very tech, very pro.

If you have something else that will list your services, and you plan on doing some kind of referral program, then putting the referral form on the back would make sense.
Yeha im still working on a referral program.
After i get established and start doing well im thinking of setting off like a Raffle every six months.

Idk something small a camera or a free Virus removal.

Idk yet im full of ideas but i dont wanna get in over my head yet...too soon for all that.
lol

but thx guys! Keep them coming

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Old 01-19-2009, 08:19 PM
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Nice looking card. IIWY, I'd register my own domain. A computer guy using a free email address looks like arse, IMHO
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A computer guy using a free email address looks like arse, IMHO
I was going to say the same thing!
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