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ComputerClinic
07-21-2009, 11:27 PM
I'm almost out of business cards and I decided to design my own this time around. Tell me what you guys think.:)

FRONT:
389

BACK:
390

theFakeGeek
07-21-2009, 11:44 PM
Looks good, says what it needs to.

Although, and this is probably my warped mind, doesn't "thecomclinic.com" sound like a website for a sperm donation clinic?

I kid. :D

thebeardedone
07-21-2009, 11:49 PM
Looks like a good, functional business card :) Good job ...

angry_geek
07-22-2009, 01:22 AM
The overall design is nice, but I really don't care for the color choices.

Tesla
07-22-2009, 06:40 AM
When using your card as a networking tool where would you be able to write notes or a short message?

iisjman07
07-22-2009, 06:42 AM
I like the colour choices... if the client has moore than one pc repair business card then your will stand out most

Tesla
07-22-2009, 08:09 AM
Also, when the cards go to print I think you may find your printer (or at least a good one would) will advise that the text of your name and title will be engulfed by the surround.

K007
07-22-2009, 10:38 AM
As design looks good, very good.
But for my personal taste the color theme is a bit to tealy...
Have a look at successful companies in the same domain to see what color theme are they using.
Humans react predictively to colors.
Seriously, the colors you are using remind me of something like North Sea, Scotland, Siberia, etc.
Just my opinion.

Larry Sabo
07-22-2009, 11:29 AM
The colours don't bother me; they are unique and will set your card apart. Perhaps set the cross icon farther apart from the adjacent textl it seems rather dense/busy being that compact. I find the contact information almost invisible, for some reason, and thought you had left it off the card. Don't know if bolded white on the blue background would work, but I'd suggest you make that font bigger/bolder.

On the back, the underline is too long and unnecessary, IMO. If it were mine, I'd italicize the heading and make it slightly larger, and use regular (not italicized) text for the bulleted items. Also, use bullets rather than dashes (which should be separated from the text, in both cases). Overall, still an eye-catching card. I didn't associate the domain name with anything purile, so I must be an innocent babe in the woods.

Larry

PS -- As an afterthought, no bullets are required at all on the back.

ComputerClinic
07-23-2009, 04:50 AM
Thanks for the replies! I never thought about my domain name that way...until now. Dammit guys now I don't like it anymore. Haha, Just kidding. I would have liked computerclinic.com but of course that was taken. I personally like the colors, although I might redo my whole color scheme in the future (website, logo, and all). Thanks for the warning about the dark blue drowning out my name/position. Here's and updated version with my name in gold:

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NickCat11
07-23-2009, 11:49 AM
Much better with the new color, it definitely stands out more.