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GraemeP
04-09-2008, 04:20 PM
Hey technibblers,
I have just finished my new site well not finished but got it to a stage where I can have it live. Have a look and let me know what you think. Any suggestions would be very welcome.
Thanks
http://www.leetware.com.au

MHCG
04-09-2008, 04:37 PM
On the first page: (I'll list them by page as I go through them)

This: "support at a affordable rate" should be "an affordable rate"

Capitalization inconsistencies: "We come to Your Home or Office."
"Computer service and Repairs"

Typo: "Basic Computer Lessions"

Should be period, not comma: "is in need of help, Not all"

Plurality disagreement: "windows that appears from nowhere"

Change: "You end up in a same strange site, whenever" to "You end up on some strange site whenever"

All of your sentences in the "symptoms of infection" area should either end with a period or not end with a period, but not both.

This: "computer is infected this is just" should be "computer is infected, these are just"

Jory
04-09-2008, 04:38 PM
I like the layout, but the color choices leave a lot to be desired in my opinion. If it were me I'd probably have done the logo in the darkest shade of blue in the header/footer gradient instead of red. That orange kind of comes from no where too. I'd probably change anything that's orange into a different shade of blue from the gradient.

In addition I'd make the footer the same height as the header. All that's just opinion stuff though. I'd say you did a fine job.

MHCG
04-09-2008, 04:45 PM
Contact Us page:

"Leetware is an Australian owned and run onsite computer support and accessories business. We are devoted to supplying our customers with the best technology solutions backed up with after sales support. We started in 2006 with onsite system support and service in the central Victoria area and are now supplying computers, accessories, software and web hosting solutions Australia wide."

MHCG
04-09-2008, 04:48 PM
Services page:

Leetware has a large range of services, here is a list of some of the computer services we offer. If you require a service that's not listed, please call as we more than likely will be able to assist you with your problem.

* Computer Service and Repairs
* Computer Maintenance
* Virus Detection and Removal
* Data Recovery
* Data Backup Solutions



* Hardware/Software Diagnostics
* Hardware/Software Upgrades
* Basic Computer Lessions
* Wireless Network Setups
* After Hours Support

MHCG
04-09-2008, 04:50 PM
The copyright notice link in the footer does not work

Edit: It looks like just on the Contact Us page unless you've made changes already.

geekhelp4u
04-09-2008, 04:52 PM
I agree with Jory.. the color almost makes it hard to read, and is undesirable! White on gray is just a no no in the design world! And MHCG, agree with all the mistakes you see also! As for your contact page... you need a contact form. If they don't have an email address, or they are borrowing a friends computer to send you a message they can't without a form!

There are many more symptoms that your computer is infected this is just a few of them. This is a run on sentence

MHCG
04-09-2008, 05:07 PM
There are many more symptoms that your computer is infected this is just a few of them. This is a run on sentence

I wondered about that. I think it should be There are many more symptoms that your computer is infected; these are just a few of them

GraemeP
04-09-2008, 05:21 PM
Thank you very much for that :) I have fixed them up, as for the color i tryed using a blue instead of the orange and it was alot harder to read. I will have to have a think and change the colors around.

mityay
04-09-2008, 05:50 PM
Seems like you have a problem with grammar. I found great online service that can proofread your writing for cheap. I have never tried them, so don't blame me if they are fake. They seem legit though.

[www].gramlee.com

GraemeP
04-09-2008, 06:41 PM
Thats for sure no good at grammar at all :( Normally get mates to read over things for me.

syst3merror
04-09-2008, 08:39 PM
just curious, you advertise a wireless setup deal for $110 with the router, pcmcia card and pci card AND labor.....what brands are everything and where are you getting them that cheap that you still make a profit?

MHCG
04-09-2008, 09:18 PM
Yeah, I was wondering the same thing.

Jory
04-09-2008, 10:45 PM
Heh, me too. I figured it was a typo and he meant $210.

GraemeP
04-09-2008, 11:06 PM
The brand is TP-Link, and im still making a profit.

ErniG
04-09-2008, 11:13 PM
It looks nice. Clean and informative with relevant points, I like it, but it may have a bit to much information on just one screen using the same small font all over the place. That is my penny. Thank you.

syst3merror
04-09-2008, 11:38 PM
The brand is TP-Link, and im still making a profit.

I guess I can kinda see how you are making a profit: (prices are from newegg.com)

TP-Link wireless router= $29.99 (right now 19.99 with mail-in rebate)
TP-Link laptop cardbus= $17.99
Zonet wireless PCI Card=$13.99
-------------------------------
total without labor= $61.97

So not including labor and install you an extra $50

Granted, those are all on newegg.com. if there are better websites, you might make more off the deal. :)

Thanks for the info!!!

Reynold
12-15-2011, 05:04 AM
Try using a word processor and website designer like MS word and dreamweaver.

dbdawn
12-15-2011, 05:18 AM
Try responding to threads that are NOT over two years old!

16k_zx81
12-15-2011, 09:09 PM
das computerlink ist KAPUT

Index of /



SugarCE-6.2.0.zip (http://www.leetware.com.au/SugarCE-6.2.0.zip)
TimeTrex3.5.0.zip (http://www.leetware.com.au/TimeTrex3.5.0.zip)
againstwbc.com/ (http://www.leetware.com.au/againstwbc.com/)
crm/ (http://www.leetware.com.au/crm/)
gpollard/ (http://www.leetware.com.au/gpollard/)
sanikleen/ (http://www.leetware.com.au/sanikleen/)
store/ (http://www.leetware.com.au/store/)

Apache mod_qos/9.69 mod_fcgid/2.3.6 mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.leetware.com.au Port 80

SnoSalmon
12-16-2011, 06:04 AM
hahaha it's a necro thread. After reading all the comments etc I checked out the site, and indeed its broken. Please lock this thread!

RegEdit
12-16-2011, 10:46 AM
This is what I'm seeing............
Index of /

SugarCE-6.2.0.zip
TimeTrex3.5.0.zip
againstwbc.com/
crm/
gpollard/
sanikleen/
store/

Apache mod_qos/9.69 mod_fcgid/2.3.6 mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.leetware.com.au Port 80

ahmadumair
12-16-2011, 01:22 PM
This is what I'm seeing............
Index of /

SugarCE-6.2.0.zip
TimeTrex3.5.0.zip
againstwbc.com/
crm/
gpollard/
sanikleen/
store/

Apache mod_qos/9.69 mod_fcgid/2.3.6 mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.leetware.com.au Port 80
me too and btw this thread is about three years old!