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chrisaroz
03-20-2010, 09:22 PM
I'm about to rework my site over the next month and would like critique on the current one.

http://www.goldenyearscomputerservices.com

iisjman07
03-20-2010, 09:31 PM
I like it how it is :o. One thing I would add is to add an address/phone number perhaps down the side of the page so it is right there for any potential customers and so they don't have to look for it. If you're strapped for ideas I'd look at http://www.techsitebuilder.com/technibble.html?a_aid=3

chrisaroz
03-20-2010, 09:38 PM
Thanks for the idea, I had never even thought of that.

I looked at the TechSiteBuilder, but don't like that it's only a single page (as far as I can tell) and that I couldn't buy exclusivity for my area. I DO need to steal some of the design elements though (like the contact info and pricing up front).

iisjman07
03-20-2010, 09:41 PM
Bryce did a review here: http://www.technibble.com/podnutz-computer-repair-tech-website-builder-review/

Cambridge PC Support
03-21-2010, 07:04 AM
looks good, though it took a long time to load up here

chrisaroz
03-22-2010, 04:30 PM
Anyone else? I'd really appreciate any and all comments.

Cambridge PC Support
03-22-2010, 04:45 PM
font quite small for the "older generation"

phone number hidden away at the bottom of the page

"Providing Technology Solutions" - a bit too management-speak

"3. Others first" - needs rewording

[I hope I'm right in assuming you deal mainly with old people?]

chrisaroz
03-22-2010, 05:04 PM
[I hope I'm right in assuming you deal mainly with old people?]
Correct assumption, and excellent feedback, thank you.

Cambridge PC Support
03-22-2010, 05:22 PM
you're welcome

how about putting something like this

"we can assist with making your computer easier to use and more accessible"