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Mushin
11-25-2009, 12:30 AM
OK... This is a first proof of a Yellowbook.com video that is being designed. They have messed up the graphics quite a bit and the first slide and last slide are horrible and will be changed but please take a look and give me any feedback that you can. In particular I am interested in what your thoughts are on the script.

here is the link http://www.yellowbook.com/testvideo/?URL=http://www.pindaractive.com/yellowbook/proof/BKCRA8ZZW_B2-1/site-tech-bkcra8zzw-7407399883.flv

Attached are some of the slides so you can see what they should be like.

Thanks
Phil


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Mushin
11-28-2009, 02:36 AM
If anyone has viewed the ad would you mind giving some feedback on the working of the voice over? I would like to get some real input.

Thanks

Tweak
11-28-2009, 02:50 AM
Besides the somewhat fast and odd sounding female voice...sounds & looks great I think, gives decent info without offering too much, should net calls to follow up on specifics. :cool:

NickCat11
11-28-2009, 04:34 AM
I agree with Tweak. The video and the content are great. But the female voice has to go.