Yellow pages...

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For 2010 i'm going to start small with a 2.5x2.5 inch business ad in the yellow pages of my area of course... and I have till this friday actually to finalize what i want it to say/look like...

Any critique would be greatly appreciated.

A Prompt PC - Computer Repair Services

~Onsite, same day repair available! -red-
~Virus and Spyware removal and more...
~"With lower prices than any competitor around we'll
come to you and optimize your PC to it's most
efficient speeds and repair it of any problems."
Professional Computer Techs -italic
website -blue and underlined

[NickCat11]

For 2010 i'm going to start small with a 2.5x2.5 inch business ad in the yellow pages of my area of course... and I have till this friday actually to finalize what i want it to say/look like...

Any critique would be greatly appreciated.

A Prompt PC - Computer Repair Services

~Onsite, same day repair available! -red-
~Virus and Spyware removal and more...
~"With lower prices than any competitor around we'll
come to you and optimize your PC to it's most
efficient speeds and repair it of any problems."
Professional Computer Techs -italic
website -blue and underlined

I'm not sure if it's a good idea to say you have the lowest prices compared to others. Some people may associate that with lower quality work. Maybe somehow state your prices are very competitive rather than lower.

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~"With the most competitive prices around we'll
come to you and optimize your PC to it's most
efficient speeds and repair it of any problems."

FINAL

thank you so much nick that was a good suggestion

[NickCat11]

Sounds good. Good Luck!